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I bought all three books in the bundle a couple days ago, but only got to the first book today. I devoured it, actually just finished it, and I loved it! :D Can't wait to dig into the second one and see what Sarah and her growing bioengineered polycule get up to!

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<3 thank you so much!

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What REALLY happens when a nerd becomes a super powered sexy alien and revolts against the ™alien swarm™ and ™alien elves™. If you like the craft of stars, hate the dystopia of late stage capitalism, and working out the kinks of an ethical revolution, this series is for you!

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She isn't just a nerd! She's also a goober :) 

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I respect unapologetically horny art when I see it. This is what I needed after reading bleak real life history for a while. Thumbs up and such. 

Thanks so much :)

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It's Sarah Kerrigan vs the UEF.  That's it.  That's the novel.

Well, okay, it's half the novel - the other half is hot sex scenes with a girl who can rewrite people's biology to turn them into hot aliens (and trans their gender if they want), and there's a layer of cyberpunk hypercapitalist theming to round it out and establish that the bad guys deserve to have Sarah zerg-rush all over them.  But I really can't exaggerate how much it's borrowing from Starcraft and Supreme Commander.

(There's even a throwaway gag where Sarah not-Kerrigan is deciding what to call her new ranged combat unit.  She tries to call it a "hydralisk," but changes her mind when she finds out it's copyrighted.)

That being said, the writing is pretty solid.  It does a good job of depicting an RTS-style army in a way that sounds cool instead of contrived or game-y.     And DragonCobolt continues to be good at writing hot sex scenes.  So like, I'm not saying it's a bad thing to do a porn parody of famous RTS games, I'm just saying that it's very upfront about what it's doing.

Thanks! And yeah, heh, I like to think of my book as an advertisement for Supreme Commander